搁浅（Whisper）

The skyline never brightened　久未放晴的天空
Still decorated with your smile　依旧留着你的笑容
I cried But couldn’t bury my blame　哭过却无法掩埋歉疚
My kite runner long been gone　风筝在阴天搁浅
The shadow waiting for your hand　想念还在等待救援
I seized the kite reminded of memories　我拉着线复习你给的温柔
Loneliness deserted aside　曝晒在一旁的寂寞
Commitments only our lies　笑我给不起承诺
Why are you why are you still willing to say hi　怎么会怎么会你竟原谅了我

Forever whisper to the starlight　我只能永远读着对白
Whisper how I made your heart break　读着我给你的伤害
There was no apology　我原谅不了我
Oh just pretend that we never met　就请你当作我已不在
Open my eyes to find nothing left　我睁开双眼看着空白
Forget what you had expected　忘记你对我的期待
Oh please don’t expect　读完了依赖
I’ve left you on that night　我很快就离开

The skyline never brightened　久未放晴的天空
Still decorated with your smile　依旧留着你的笑容
I cried But couldn’t bury my blame　哭过却无法掩埋歉疚
My kite runner long been gone　风筝在阴天搁浅
The shadow waiting for your hand　想念还在等待救援
I seized the kite reminded of memories　我拉着线复习你给的温柔
Loneliness deserted aside　曝晒在一旁的寂寞
Commitments only our lies　笑我给不起承诺
Why are you why are you still willing to say hi　怎么会怎么会你竟原谅了我

Forever whisper to the starlight　我只能永远读着对白
Whisper how I made your heart break　读着我给你的伤害
There was no apology　我原谅不了我
Oh just pretend that we never met　就请你当作我已不在
Open my eyes to find nothing left　我睁开双眼看着空白
Forget what you had expected　忘记你对我的期待
Oh please don’t expect　读完了依赖
I’ve left you on　我很快就

Forever whisper to the starlight　我只能永远读着对白
Whisper how I made your heart break　读着我给你的伤害
There was no apology　我原谅不了我
Oh just pretend that we never met　就请你当作我已不在
Open my eyes to find nothing left　我睁开双眼看着空白
Forget what you had expected　忘记你对我的期待
Oh please don’t expect　读完了依赖
I’ve left you on that night　我很快就离开

半直译最成功的作品，其实半直译看似把直译翻不出来的东西换掉了，应该简单一些，但同时也需要想到替换的意象，这首歌应该来自当时左边的同学经常在教室放声大唱《搁浅》的副歌，于是听强基无事就翻译的，选词和押韵都不错。